Wow, the kids loved the unit on the No, David and the Pigeon books during Reading and Writing Workshop. I wanted to share some of their writing from Writing Workshop. I think you will be amazed, I was!
This time during Writing Workshop many of the children wanted copies of the books by David Shannon so they could refer to them while they wrote their stories. I told them that was called research. I will use that word many times this year. Powerful readers and writers do research.
You can tell we used the No, David books to teach about making choices, both good and bad. I was glad this student concentrated on the end of the book where David makes good choices!
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| Poor David! This child took the story and then placed David into a whole new situation. I didn't ask what David did to get arrested. I should have. This would have helped this child expand their story even further. I will come back to this illustration a little later in the year and ask this child why David got arrested and encourage him to expand the story. |
The next set of samples are from the children that wrote about Pigeon. You will notice that the students are all at different stages of the writing process. That is very normal at this age. Right now Writing Workshop is all about thinking, creating and forming stories. If you ask your child about the picture they can tell you the whole story in their drawing. This is why I started the unit using people who write and illustrate their books, such as Mo Williams and David Shannon. This way the children learn that the illustrations are just as important to the story as the pictures. The more they practice studying the illustrations the better they will get at visualizing their own illustrations for their own stories.
This group is working very hard on their illustrations for their story.
Look at how this child researchers in the book
Don't Let the Pigeon Drive The Bus to capture the "crazy" reaction Pigeon has when he can't drive the bus. See how this child looked at the illustration by Mo Williams and tried to recreate that "crazy" on their illustration? When you look at the drawings side by side you can see that the child is working hard to recreate "crazy" in their drawing. Pretty smart!
You can see in this illustration how this child took the story from the book and expanded on it, making the Pigeon a giant. The bus is very small. Great imagination. I will come back to this drawing with this child later in the school year to see if they can expand the story into a beginning, middle and end and then publish it. We will then place the story into our classroom library!
Ok, I am totally in love with this wedding van this child drew. Again, look at how this child is expanding on the original story to create her own. This shows wonderful attention to detail. I wonder if she will make this into a book this year to publish?
This child is already trying to write her own story. This is what is great about this type of writing project and why I love Writing Workshop. Each child can work on the skills they are learning and don't have to work too far ahead of their skill level, or have to stay "with the class" if they are ready to jump ahead into inventive writing or actual writing. At this age children have a wide range of skills and it is critical to let them work at their own pace.
Wow, a tornado is on the way! Again, this child really stretched beyond the book and created a whole new situation for Pigeon. I think this is going to be an amazing group of writers and readers this year!
I hope you enjoyed this little look into our Writing and Reading Workshops. Show the pictures to you child and see if they can identify their story and have them retell it to you tonight. I couldn't post them all, but you will see them at Parent-Teacher Conferences.